The Critter's Monolougue

~*The Critter's Monolougue*~

"I'm critter with a small head and fast ticking brain, at times abnormal heart-beats. You will always find ME engaged in multitasking, with MY pandora box of strange views and nonsense ideas, those endless jabberings, thousands of penniless thoughts and zillions of unsolved questions…!

That’s my world of weirdness, wildness, confusions, dilemmas, nonconformity and quirks. It’s Good, Bad and Ugly ...

To Live, love, laugh, play, relax, rejoice, celebrate...Explore, discover, question, dare, understand, wonder, reflect...Create, care, conserve, nurture...Share, help, hug, heal, inspire.... These are just some of the ways this small creature feels about life. Do you at times feel the same?"


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Wednesday, February 6, 2008

Jalebi Point

It was October 2nd and She and He had a fight last night on a dumb issue. The fight was for the fact that She loves drinking at times but He doesn't. The fight was so bad that night that they didn't sleep together. He slept on the floor and she left the room at 4 in the fine morning and watched TV like a crazy philander till 9 in the morning and then she came up and banged the door and slept crying on her pillow as she realized the fact that her boy friend doesn't understand her feelings and feel happy with the things which she feels nice about. That night two of his friends had come from far of places.He told them that his girl friend was there and so they rushed to meet the girl who has been staying in their friend's heart. The discussion continued.. The talk was for hours.. the fun days in IIT M campus.. songs , fashion show and great deal of photo suits....continued and continued till 3 that night.

The Sunday morning was a bizzare. Neither He nor She wanted such a unhealthy environ to crop up in front of outsiders.. Nor they did dare to talk to each other till 4 in
the afternoon . The silence broke when He made She eat with him the lunch... Aloo ka paratha, Rice, Dal, Salad and Bhindi fry.

The evening went by and it was time or the friends to leave. he and She had a great evening with Sri and Jeeth and both went to drop the friends on the bus stop.

The waiting for a bus is the worst thing in life(from experience).
Four of then were standing and all of a sudden She noticed this guy... the place was extremely crowded. small kids, youngsters, old folks, teenagers... Two thin lanky guys speeding their hands. It was the hot place with burning wood and people saying "arrey bahi, mujhe jaldi do"... Arrey chotu, jaldi pack kar de"..

All of a sudden, She's eyes got fixed there and as a greedy pig, she kept gazing at the place and to He.He as her better half, well the bitter half at times, knew what She wanted and the telepathy worked. He asked, "Chaheye kya." She nodded.

But He didnt have a single penny in his pocket to buy the golden colored, sweet flavored, sexy wires. He was awesomely feeling to give a hug to her and kiss her in the road. For the fact that she broke her silence and demanded. After a long time span, He could see his heart beating again like it did, when He met She in the platform of Bangalore for the first time. He couldn't resist the fatherly love sprouting inside him nor could he show off his romantic feels in front of the public. desperately, He asked his old frens to give him "Five Bugs"... "F*** just five bugs... why Five? Man take Ten...", saying this Sri searched his wallet and gave He ten bugs to buy the mouth watering, yummy, delicious, hot-hot Jalebis.
















Soon the bus came, Sri and Jeeth hugged He and his queen, waved their hands,got into their bus and the bus passed away.

He crossed the road and came to the junction, the Jalebi Point, which was prior crowded and asked the lanky fellow.." Give me ten rupees ka jalebi". saying so he looked at his queen, who was lost in her world and gave a smile with utter satisfaction.The fellow packed the not- hot instant made orangy, delicious Jalebis and gave it to He.

Holding it in his right hand, he walked besides She,warming up her left hand in the fine fall of the night and disappeared in the dark.

3 comments:

Joe said...

nice blog.

I like your writing style.

Amtrips said...

thanx m.. thats the beginning of the story world more to come i suppose... by the way does ur blog exist somewhr?

chaitra said...

hope u'll have more things to share , more adventures-between you and between us-the readers?- perhaps something like trekking, what if even a road to a hill in Ramanagaram...? :)

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