Musings of a Mindless Critter: All was in vain

The Critter's Monolougue

~*The Critter's Monolougue*~

"I'm critter with a small head and fast ticking brain, at times abnormal heart-beats. You will always find ME engaged in multitasking, with MY pandora box of strange views and nonsense ideas, those endless jabberings, thousands of penniless thoughts and zillions of unsolved questions…!

That’s my world of weirdness, wildness, confusions, dilemmas, nonconformity and quirks. It’s Good, Bad and Ugly ...

To Live, love, laugh, play, relax, rejoice, celebrate...Explore, discover, question, dare, understand, wonder, reflect...Create, care, conserve, nurture...Share, help, hug, heal, inspire.... These are just some of the ways this small creature feels about life. Do you at times feel the same?"

Wednesday, June 3, 2009

All was in vain

Like a rolling stone,
that gathers no moss
I heard the tone..
gone with a toss!!
The tune rang in my ears
For past many years..
I meant it,I need it
I want it..!!
Aah..said my brain
I was drenched in the rain..!!

Under the fig tree
I stood free..
Open like a book,
Depicted and anticipated..
With all my broken hooks..
I try and try
And finally I cry.
Crying in pain
But all was in vain..!!
-amrita

-A moron's dilemma

(written and sketched by `Amtrips`)

4 comments:

PANKAJ KUMAR said...: I believe nothing in world goes is vain. But thats really nice and sweet. and drawing too.
Kabhi kabhi barish me bheegna chahiye man to shaanti milti hai hehehehehe but u r so hypersensitive girl ....; June 3, 2009 at 12:49 PM
chaitra said...: hilarious cartoon! can't believe that you drew it! great!
poem- the first stanza is great......; June 3, 2009 at 11:51 PM
ATMAJA's said...: this poem of yours reminds me of Kishore Kuma's song -"ek ladki bheegi bhagi si........".the snowman in the cartoon really matches with u .hahahaha.; June 9, 2009 at 4:31 PM
Amtrips said...: Thanks Pankaj, Atmaja and Chaitra for such aprreciating words.; June 10, 2009 at 12:26 AM